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Aug 08, 2018cambridgedon rated this title 2.5 out of 5 stars
The oxy-moronic title is a good clue to the plot. The jarring (at least to me) incorrect use of the word 'gate' three times instead of 'gait' and the word 'discrete' twice instead of 'discreet' leaves me wondering if proofreaders have taken a vacation. It's a reasonably good story but nothing to really write home about due to some plot holes. There's nothing to sear the writer's style into your memory or want to take another chance on her.